As Su-Lynn mentioned, I lost the fox in my animation. She said this is my experience and inspiration for my work, I should consider using this lady in my animation. This suggestion was so useful which made me clearer about my model woman. Previously, the only element for the target is elegant woman, there was no reference and details. Another suggestion I got was from my classmate Yanbin, he pointed out that the plot in screen room was hard for the audience to find the focus point. Then I got my notes and developments:
- I need to redesign my model character and I need to combine the fox lady with my current designing. Also, I need to give her a image in the girl’s sketching.
- I should think about the screen ideas more. Is there a different but more interesting things happened in the darkness? And could it be understood by the audiences?